Status Update

So far along in the process of the “Ten Page Paper” I have been able to go to the field site and have an interview and watch the way reporters interact with each other and how they do their work. I have done research but the result tends to be the same information over and over again. It is always about numbers and statistics and how times have changed. Unfortunately I still have to find a claim, because I cannot find anything to exactly argue for or against in regards to my subculture. In peer review, I wish that someone would tell me what my claim should be, but I know that should not be my question. I think my question would be if my ideas and my thoughts are coherent, because that is a problem I really have when it comes to writing and I feel extremely confused about what I am doing.